Thursday, December 10, 2009

Essay # 9 Clip Practice

Salomon Sanchez
December 4, 2009
Practice essay # 9
Dear Mr. Mayor
Are you one of those people who would like to spend more time with your children?. Improving the life of families is difficult but I understand that giving free day care 9 hours per day to parent who have children or giving parents a small amount of money to spend more time at home with their children are difficult choices. However, I consider giving free day care for children is the best choice to improve the life of families for three factors: Society improvement, Parents worriless and children care.
Society improvement is a good statement to discuss because children always have been considered as our future. Some attention and care in parents toward children change when children are not in the right place. This also produce bad manners and conducts which people can avoid when children get special care by the time their parent work. I’m sure that giving free care for children will help to the society improvement because we are taking care about our future when children become professional as well.
Parents need not to be worried about their children, so they can also take a break of their children when they are not at home or working because they know someone is taking care of them. In fact, not to be worried make parents be more patients when they don’t stress out too much.
Society and Parents issues are important but children care is the most. Statistics are shown that children care has been an important factor to prevent children injure. We all know that children always go back and forth, so that is the moment when children need more attention and care.
According with this three factors discussed in this essay – children care, Parents worriless and society improvement – I think give free day care for 9 hours per day to parents is the best choice to improve lives of families

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