Thursday, December 10, 2009

Essay # 5 Clip Practice

Salomon Sanchez
November 17, 2009
Composition # 5, Draft # 1

Practice Essay
Dear Mr Mayor:
Let's think about what would be better to the community. Deciding what to do with funds you have gotten is not easy. Used the money on schools in bad neighborhoods or improve neighborhoods near toristic attractions are important issues. Definitely spending the money on scools in bad neighborhood in the best for the community for some reasons.
Students will keep themselfs healthy. First of all, getting a gym in good conditions. Students who like to work out ofter classes keep their mind and body health out of vandalism and focus in school. Secondly making clubs to join into a froups for sports. We can consider this kind of sport clubs like a present for those guys who like to keep high score. Finally get those places to make it posible. Sometimess what is diffucult to get is the place where students can do sport activities.
The classrooms are needed to increase the probability for more students to come. First of all, students need conputer tecnology to get their work finished at this time , one of the nost important recourses in school are computers because teachers give asigments which have veen done by internet. Secondly the enough furniture permit the students get faster in class. Sometimes students who came to class late have problems trying to get a chair from other classrooms. Finally, students need different lenses from different teachers.

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